What is JFK?

Several problems: Decide on a target audience. Never use "I, me, my, mine, them or ours" in an essay. Joseph Kennedy was JFK's father, his brothers were Edward M. Kennedy and Robert F. Kennedy. Use spell check. Your thoughts are tered. Re-read the essay and put similar ideas together. Make the first paragraph (or thesis statement) more interesting. Grab your target audience and make them NEED to read this essay.