Lilia Mcdole
Tuesday, August 16, 2011
What to you think? first chapter!?
Already have a problem from first sentence. We need an attention grabber like the shot filled the air of the gloomy saturday night. I know lame but something exciting. This sentence made me want to put this book down, right there and then.
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